Everything falls in silence

Tommy B Goode

Everything

falls in silence

I no longer hear

my heart breaking

and my soul

no longer crying

fallen pieces

lie silently

becoming fragments

  • Author: Tommy B Goode (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2025 08:31
  • Comment from author about the poem: Translation of a Dutch poem (Alles valt in stilte) I wrote.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 15
  • Users favorite of this poem: Poetic Licence, arqios, Cheeky Missy
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  • sorenbarrett

    A picture of devastation after the tragedy is painted here in so few words. very nicely done

    • Tommy B Goode

      Thank you for your appreciation.

    • Poetic Licence

      A few words that says so much, paints an image of a complete devastation after a personal tradegy, is as they have become numb to the noise, nicely expressed and written

      • Tommy B Goode

        Thank you very much for the kind words.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Eugene S.

          The translation comes trough vividly!

          • Tommy B Goode

            Thanks, I really did my best to keep the original feel of the poem but still translate it well. I also think it has worked out nicely.

          • Tony36

            Great write



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