False beliefs
When will you yield
The cinnabar field?
"When faith has relaxed
The Imaginative tracks
Of your heart's desire"
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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“Imaginative tracks” are quite what our life vessel is on. Liked and Faved 🤩🙏🏻🕊️
For sure! Thanks for dropping by.
No worries🙏🏻🕊️
I don't know about my heart but your writes always get my imagination going, another enjoyable read
What if a seed of unique potential has been planted in our hearts, which makes it our heart's desire?!
Slippery as mercury and just as shiny this poem provoked a little thought in its understanding. Very nicely written.
Another poetic comment! Thanks for dropping by.
Iz dat so, eh? Hmm. My favorite cinnamon is korintje, "red hots" flavor. And that's not imagination. Pity mine is proving so useless in this particular case. Delightfully rendered. Thank you for sharing, you rascal.
I'll have to try the korinjte! Thanks for dropping by.
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