cold wind
traveler adjusts coat
still cold
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Author:
Jerry Reynolds (
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- Published: April 18th, 2025 07:13
- Category: Sociopolitical
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett
cold wind
traveler adjusts coat
still cold
Comments5
Ah it is the ambiguity that catches my eye first. Is it the traveler or the wind that is still cold? But then there is deeper meaning in the metaphor. No matter what we do it may alter little our perceptions, or in the second case it may alter little that that is around us. In such a case science may be nothing more than an change in our perception not reality and so the same for our effect on those things around us. A fave Complexity in simplicity and that is poetic to the max.
Thanks, SB. I appreciate your deeper look.
Excellent write
Thanks.Tony.
You're welcome
Good write J.
Thanks, Orchi.
It's really out of seasonally cold here dear Jerry, I actually love the sweet cold but not the rain it becomes too humid, I'm in Italy but apparently in England it's more like the med now. 🌹
Thanks, Teddy. We have had a cold spring as well. It's warm today. Trees are in full bloom. Beautiful.
So true Jerry.
Andy
Thanks, Andy
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