There are some days
When you do nothing but sigh
Remember, then, my friend
It’s always good to cry..
Vent out your sorrows
And sob out the pain
The tears you shed
Will not be in vain
For you will find release
And your heart will feel light
And you will find your hope
Just when you think you’d lost sight
So sit back and think
Of how far you have come
Then you will realize
How far out, you can reach
And find the solace in your life
That nothing can ever breach
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Author:
safina (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: April 20th, 2025 00:36
- Comment from author about the poem: vent it out..
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I have the gift that I simply don't worry about the small stuff, it's not the case for all, I love your message it reminds us all that not only are we human we all go through things that make us unhappy, insecure and restless. Not everyone knows we all have a fabulous mechanism called courage, some like myself have to be pushed to the edge to find it. Beautiful rhyme beautiful wisdom. 🌹
i envy you your gift to brush aside the small stuff, i was a very positive person, but lately the negativity around me is trying its best to pull me down, and i have to strive hard to find back my lost courage.
thanks for stopping by and your wise words - helps a lot. God bless you
❤️ you will find it as long as you refuse to be anything but negative ❤️
that's the real challenge for me now..let's see how i cope
A great message sent in a poem that has wonderful flow from good meter and rhyme. A very lovely read.
thanks a ton - written when things were trying to weigh me down, and i was trying to retrieve my lost hope and courage..
Wonderfully rendered poem that flows beautifully. Its message is a much needed one too. Well done on this, my friend! 🌹👏
the truth is that i needed to convince myself about it first and foremost - that it's darkest before dawn
thanks for stopping by - have a good day
Indeed. Glad you did, because it is true. You are most welcome. You too!
Powerful work.
thank you so much - have a good day
Nah - can't be doing that, I'm a man!!😊😂
i truly admire your spirit - of course there has never been any doubt about it ever - lol
glad to hear from your side after a long time - take care
Thanks for your response. I've had to cut back on my activity here through a I hope, temporary lack of not inspiration, but motivation as I had other imperatives including reading books...
You look after yourself too.
that reminds me of the number of books lying unread at my end - hope i can catch up on it too
have a good week ahead - take care..
Thanks. This is just what someone needs at a dire moment. Positive poem and thoughtfully written!
yes indeed - that is what i felt, and therefore shared
thanks a ton for the feedback
I am a big fan of rhyming and you do it so well here as well as telling a great lesson. Well done!
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