The fine clear green waters of My River
Pass slowly by me as I walk by its side
Its beauty and grace to me deliver
As I walk by its side with love and pride
The swans glide gracefully on its surface
Reflections dance in the sparkling stream
Going passed me in glory to their place
Gliding together as in a fine dream
The river’s embrace, so tender and sweet,
Cradles these swans in its such loving arms,
A tranquil retreat where hearts can meet,
Away from the world and all its alarms.
My River, with swans so pure and so fair,
A haven of calm, a breath of fresh air.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The swans on My River are so wonderful
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
Beautiful Andy. 🌹
Thank you AP.
Andy
Beautiful sight, beautiful poem 🙏🏻🕊️
Most kind arqios, thank you.
Andy
Most welcome, Andy🙏🏻🕊
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
A beautiful sonnet Gold about nature's beautiful creations. A wonderful write
Much appreciated soren, thank you.
Andy
So needed in this day and age of being always connected. Communing with nature a beautiful antidote.
Nice work Andy.
John
Yes John, communing with Nature is so wonderfully relaxing.
Andy
In verse, the quintessential English swan and expressed appropriately in sonnet form, and expressed beautifully, I may add. A delight to read.
Kind regards,
Tony.
Thank you for your kind words Tony, much appreciated.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Much apprciated Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
I've never seen a Swan here in Florence or anywhere in Italy. A beautiful sight reminding me of the English beauty. 🌹
Such a shame Teddy, they are beautiful to watch.
Andy
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