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The winds howl their raucous decree,
Sea-born gods bellow—wild, unshackled!
Foam-crested steeds surge forth,
Brazen, unbridled, shattering silence!
The song of the deep erupts—
Silver tongues twisting in unison,
A chorus sung not in words, but in waves,
Infinite! Immortal! Unyielding!
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: dith·y·ramb /ˈdɪθəˌræm, -ˌræmb/ [dith-uh-ram, -ramb] –noun 1. a Greek choral song or chant of vehement or wild character and of usually irregular form, originally in honor of Dionysus or Bacchus. 2. any poem or other composition having similar characteristics, as an impassioned or exalted theme or irregular form. 3. any wildly enthusiastic speech or writing. Origin: 1595–1605; < L dīthyrambus < Gk dīthýrambos
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Listening to the sea can be so inspiring arqios.
Andy
That sound, never grows old and tales of ages told! Agreed happily, Andy🕊🙏🏻
arqios
Good write A.
Thanks O 🙏🏻🕊️
I heard a rumor that the deep will erupt soon. (Pacific area).
Great write. I felt the sea through your words!
I should head for higher ground, then🙏🏻🕊️
That's a good idea. Well, time will tell.
👍🏻will keep you updated from this end 📲
I'm in the Pacific area too. So many bs artists out there, but anyways check out July 5th.
Roger that 🙏🏻🕊️
Must he that kind of day/week🙏🏻🕊️
Not only entertained with a most magnificent piece of literary work but I learned something as well. The word choices for this poem are most artistic. A beautiful creation that moves the reader and itself as waves in the sea, a tempest in the soul. A fave
Thanks Soren🙏🏻🕊️only too glad for this to have gone across the pond🕊️🙏🏻
Wonderful dithyramb.I always learn something reading your work cobber.
It’s awesome to learn stuff. Much of my early writing was dithyrambic in tone and structure. Once I learnt the classic form it made more sense what was at the beginning just intuitive. Thanks for your valued words🙏🏻🕊️
Breathtaking!!!! The language is vivid and powerful, capturing the fury and majesty of the sea. Well written!!!!
Thanks Salvia, much appreciated feedback and valued thoughts🙏🏻🕊️
Wow, this poem is not only brilliant, but I learned something new! The best of both worlds, my friend. Well done on this. An instant fave! 🌹👏
Good way to start the week all around🙏🏻🕊️
Indeed, it always is.
Your poem captures the wild beauty of nature perfectly—so powerful and vivid! It reminds me of the ocean waves in Monterey, California, or the crashing waves at Dorado Beach in Puerto Rico.
Thanks Señor R! Only to glad to get feedback on how it went, the poems had gone across it appears. Most grateful to you🙏🏻🕊
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