Moving Forward Tanka.

Goldfinch60



The sun shines on us

Bringing glory to our lives

And love to us all,

Each new day it shines on us

We know that we’ll move forward.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 23rd, 2025 01:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: Each day we arise we know life is good.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 20
Get a free collection of Classic Poetry ↓

✔ Receive the ebook in seconds ✔ 50 poems from 50 different authors


Comments +

Comments5

  • orchidee

    Boohoo, it rained! Heehee.

    • Goldfinch60

      Oh dear Orchi but just dance in the rain it does you good.

      Andy

    • sorenbarrett

      Yes so true for us to see the sun we must open our eyes and with that life we go on indeed. Once again a positive to give us a start. Lovely Andy

      • Goldfinch60

        So kind soren, thank you.

        Andy

      • David Wakeling

        So true.We would be lost in space without the Sun.Great poem.

        • Goldfinch60

          We certainly would David, thank you for your kind words.

          Andy

        • arqios

          And together forward is all the merrier🕊🙏🏻

          • Goldfinch60

            So very true arqios, thank you.

            Andy

            • arqios

              You’re welcome Andy 🙏🏻🕊️

            • Teddy.15

              We shall move forward in hope that the new day brings new happiness. 🌹

              • Goldfinch60

                Each new day does bring happiness Teddy.as we got up into it.

                Andy



              To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.