A piece of earth bleeds
Life spills over barren land
Snow falls like autumn leaves
On the dead land
Buried beneath blood
The earth gasps for air
As tears of snow
Drizzle in despair
Shrouded by snow
Lies a paradise , lost in disquiet
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- Comment from author about the poem: A poem about the unwavering beauty of kashmir and the recent terror attack on civilians in kashmir
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What a metaphor here it like the snow itself disguises what lies beneath. This is a bit haunting being cold and stark. Very well written
thank you dear poet
Beautiful winter wonderland imagery. Although dark. But dark can be beauty and proved it well.
Thank you dear poetš„°
what a soulful write - my heart bleeds for the people there - my childhood neighbors were kashmiris and they were one of the most caring people i have met...i wish peace for this beautiful land
Wishing you belated happy birthday - keep the thoughts flowing - and convert them into beautiful verse...
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