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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A secret that we should all know. ❤️
- Category: Reflection
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, sorenbarrett
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Such a good message stated in such few words. I love the setup for the punch line it sounds good and looks good. Set up like two triangle one above the other
the bottom being the foundation. You said secret so I look to symbolism. Two to three to four to five words balanced on two and four words. I'm reaching but the greater weight balanced on the lesser. When we feel like nothing it is a great weight when we are everything there is less weight. The triangle to me represents balance and that is what we have when we have everything. Certainly I have reached too far. A lovely write.
Thank you for your amazing a most appreciated review dearest Sorrenbarret, I'm thrilled that you have seen the triumph in my scribbles, actually even more than I as the writer can see. Totally humbled by your words dear friend. Thank you 🌹
So very true Teddy.
Andy
Isn't it just, thank you dear Andy. 🌹
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