Breeze

Jerry Reynolds

Petals on the asphalt
Once adorned the trees
Racing here and about
On a fickle breeze 

  • Author: Jerry Reynolds (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 27th, 2025 05:50
  • Category: Nature
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  • Teddy.15

    I feel a sense of regret that the nature has been patched over but the vision you have captured is very well created. 🌹

    • Jerry Reynolds

      Thanks, Teddy. Yeah, I miss those apple blossoms. But the cherry tree is in full bloom. I'm so fickle.

    • sorenbarrett

      So many interpretations of this metaphor. I love it when the metaphor can be taken in more than one way. A most lovely write

      • Jerry Reynolds

        Thanks, SB. Your comment made my morning.

      • Tony Grannell

        It's sad really, a breeze sweeping up the debris of autumn, when once a beautiful bloom. A poetic observation exquisitely expressed. Perfect.

        Kind regards,
        Tony.

      • Goldfinch60

        So true, it is almost like it is snowing sometimes Jerry.

        Andy

        • Jerry Reynolds

          Thanks, Andy. That is so true. Snowblossoms



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