Fully dark
Lost
Confused
Lonely
Gone for all eternity
However
A spark
A light
Just a pinprick in the darkness
Hope
Joy
Desire
A choice
A chance
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Here exists the dichotomy of despair and hope of blackness and light. A lovely pairing
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Never too late for a good thing🙏🏻👍🏻
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Most welcome Tony 🕊🙏🏻
A fine write T.
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"Rebellions are built on hope"—Cassian Andor and Jyn Erso in Rogue One: A Star Wars Story. That phrase has always stuck with me. This poem reminds me of that. Wonderful job, my friend.
Thank you, love that movie
Oh. Me too! Great film. You are most welcome, my friend!
Beautifully captures the struggle and spark of hope. Well done!!!
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That light is always there for us Tony.
Andy
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Well said. Great write Tony. Always love your work.
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one side desperation, the other side hope: well described in this short but lovely verse
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you are most welcome
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