Each day we climb those mountains,
Those mountains of pleasure before us.
The more we climb the more exhausted,
The more exhausted we become.
Each moment we climb
We climb to find that happiness,
But then we find that place,
That place we were striving for.
It is found not up the mountains we climb
But we find it in the valley,
The valley of contentment .
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Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: That contentment is there for us a;;.
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Good write Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
A good message in this short. There certainly is a difference between pleasure and contentment. Very nice Andy
Thank you for your kind words soren.
Andy
I would like to visit that valley.Wonderful poem mi amigo
Thank you David, I will meet you there.
Andy
Climbing also brings a sense of ascent, most inspiring Andy🙏🏻
True arqios, thank you.
Andy
Welcome Andy🙏🏻🕊️
A secret worth sharing, because so many are unaware or blind to it. 🌹 Beautiful words dear Andy.
Thank you so much for your very kind words Teddy, much appreciated.
Andy
Beautiful insight!
Thank you Salvia.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Much appreciated Tony, thank you.
Andy
You're welcome
pure. love this.
Most kind Skally, thank you.
Andy
I like this view from the valley where one can savour the serenity without exhausting oneself in the search. Sit-back and enjoy, as it were. A poem of wisdom and very well crafted. Thank you very much.
Kind regards,
Tony.
Thank you for your kind words Tony, much appreciated.
Andy
Nice thought and thoughtful pem.
Thank you hzugman, much appreciated.
Andy
exactly - the contentment lies within us, but we keep seeking it elsewhere
lovely verse.
Thank you Nafisa, very true.
Andy
yes indeed.
have a good week ahead
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