One morning, you know
I'll be back.
The war will be over.
A sunny day in may.
I'd take the path
of happy hours.
The sky will be tearless.
walking down the aisle
to go and blossom
your smile in eternity...
One morning at dawn
I'll be there...
You know, I won't cry.
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Author:
Ellen (Pseudonym) (
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Comments6
Great to see you back ! A beautiful text imbued with so much sensitivity !
Thank you, dear friend!
A promise made in this poem poetically set and well done
Thanks for your review!
Beautiful
Thanks a lot!
You're welcome
Your poem is impressive in its philosophical restraint. I saw in it echoes of Russian poetry… It is in this harmony of reflection and feeling that its special power is born.
Thanks for such an insightful review! I truly appreciate your sensitive reading.
That is a beautifully written tender write, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much for your feedback!
You are very welcome
enjoyed, great write
Thank you for reading and for the review!
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