Waves of fresh wind dance,
stirring thought,
Sunlight strikes, and skies shift,
darkened and undone.
The canopy of words ripples,
foliage alive, in rhythmic undulation.
Cloud cover whispers,
lifting the finite chest, as stars drift,
witnessing mutely
our fleeting moments.
Each breath kisses the horizon,
soft and lingering, blending
thought and memory
in a seamless weave.
We watch as our
thoughts glide along, a melody
woven in crystal water streams.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 16th, 2026 05:47
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Comments6
Highlighted adjectives dance, shift, ripple, whisper, drift, kiss, weave and glide through this magnificent work giving it a sense of motion and life. Lovely my friend
I’m really glad that you chose to pick up on that; thanks Soren🙏🏻🕊️
You are most welcome Cryptic
My friend, this is beautiful…there’s a calm, almost meditative rhythm flowing through the whole piece. It feels like standing still inside a moving landscape where thought and nature blur together. That quiet sense of watching life pass through breath and sky really lingers. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Their witness edifies🙏🏻🕊️
Yes! It does!
I witness that this is a good write A.
Nice. Thanks O🕊️🙏🏻
If ever there were a picture of a mood painted in words, this is it.
It’s interesting to sometimes get all moody and such 🙏🏻🕊️
A fine descriptive Poem.
Thanks, Kevin🙏🏻🕊️
May those thoughts of love and peace come to the whole world Rik.
Andy
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