the moon got upset and darkness fell from the sky
the flower fell from the plant and the fragrance disappeared from the window
the butterfly sat on the bare tree and autumn spread in the air
the fireflies went to the mountains and the entire forest became dark...
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dimpsmoon (Pseudonym) (
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First, beautiful poem, my friend. Simply love the use of metaphor here and nature imagery here. Also, reading this also unlocked a lost poem idea I had from earlier this morning and, for that, I am eternally grateful. Well done! 🌹👏
thank you Robert n yaa I'm glad that my words reminded you of something...
You are most welcome!
Fine words dimpy but we know that the light will always return.
Andy
thank you Andy for your encouraging words...
Wow! I love it! Best regard.
thank you 🙂
What a beautiful and unique way of descriptive nature. I could perfectly picture the great images you represented in your words. One of my favs today for sure.
thanks a bunch for such beautiful comment.. 😍
Beautifully written and wonderful imagery as you read the right, enjoyed the read
aww thanks so much PL...
You are very welcome
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