The Laughing Matter

Tristan Robert Lange

pounding
pulsating
pressure
pumping profusely
 
each belligerent beat
bleeding out
the fierce flow
forcing me
 
upward
 
its warm inside
wet,
 
i reach
grab
find a cord,
a stem,
to pull myself up
out
of
t
h
e
tremors,
terror gripping tightly,
 
voices of laughter echo
 
but I can’t find the joke
the humor is lost
on me
 
i
climb
h
i
g
h
e
r
up into labyrinthine corridors,
the grayness matters
less than its
components:
 
all colors
mixed with
the absence of all color
 
the voices
paired with
incandescent images
humiliating and horrifying,
 
numerical problems propagating
swirling
 
               2 x 5 =
 
4 + 4 =               124/2=
 
        (6+7)*4/2=
 
like a twister.
the adrenaline twitches me.
i squirm and climb
upward
to
t
h
e
light.
 
the problems follow,
the answers elude.
I reach the peak
and lift my
weight
over
the  e
         d
       g
     e .
 
the light ahead calls
and I cannot resist it,
though i also
don't
        want
                to
                   see,
for I know what awaits.
the closer it draws,
the orbs growing over me
as i pass through the white
 
institutional
 
i now know the source
of the disembodied voices
laughing;
though,
now that i can see
through my own eyes,
the voices are embodied
by my peers,
by supposed friends
by my teachers.
 
the joke has been found.
 
I am the clown
everyone
laughs
at.
 
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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  • arqios

    Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thingπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Especially when it is forced on you in a classroom setting. Indeed. Thank you so much for your time and thoughts, my friend. πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

      • arqios

        Oh I remember those days! Most welcome πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•Š

      • sorenbarrett

        Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Thank you, Soren. For your time, your analysis, understanding and appreciation. Always valued and most appreciated, my friend. πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

        • Tony36

          Excellent write Tristan

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Thank you, my friend! πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

            • Tony36

              You're welcome

            • orchidee

              Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                Sure. Probably the start of all his...erm...problems. πŸ€£πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

              • Thomas W Case

                Superb work. Excellent flow.

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Thank you so much, Thomas. Much appreciated! πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                • NinjaGirl

                  A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!

                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                    Yeah. This, unfortunately comes from my memory, for sure. School was a cruel, cold place...and I was made to feel stupid too. It took me a long time to realize I'm not. Thank you so much, my friend, for your time and astute understanding of the poem and the emotions involved. πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                    • NinjaGirl

                      The school system failed so many kids...so many of us.

                      • Tristan Robert Lange

                        For sure! πŸ’―

                      • Salvia.S

                        Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          Thank you, dear Salvia! Your time and analysis are always anticipated and appreciated. πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                        • Poetic Licence

                          A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write

                          • Tristan Robert Lange

                            Thank you, Tobani. I am really glad you came on in time for this one as I know you understand. Your presence, time, analysis, and support are so very much appreciated. Enjoy your evening, my friend! πŸ–€πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                            • Poetic Licence

                              Thank you and you too

                            • Cheeky Missy

                              La dee! Were we, every last one of us, clowns in our various circles before finally being shown as artists and poets/poetesses? There's so much in this pretty number which resonates and seems to reverberate as if--? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, fascinating effects, and a charming though painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

                              • Tristan Robert Lange

                                Thank you so much, my friend. I am sorry for your pain, too, but it seems it produced something rather wonderous in us, didn't it? Your time, your understanding analysis and your friendship are most valued! πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                              • Teddy.15

                                Incredibly brilliant and sad your last lines, so very relatable dear Tristan, love the way you have layed it out too. Kudos 🌹

                                • Tristan Robert Lange

                                  Thank you, dear poet and friend! Sad it is relatable and, yet, glad we are not alone. Thank you for your time, thoughts and appreciation! πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                                • NafisaSB

                                  sometimes it is embarrassing to be the centre of such attention, especially when surrounded by unsympathetic people who can neither understand nor give the support one seeks
                                  the tension is palpable, and the poem beautifully written

                                  • Tristan Robert Lange

                                    Indeed. πŸ’― Thank you so much, my friend. Much appreciated! πŸ§ πŸŽ­πŸŒ€πŸ™

                                    • NafisaSB

                                      always welcome - have a beautiful weekend



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