Wow.
I mean—wow!
Really?
Would I ask you
If it didn’t?
Never mind.
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Excellent write Tristan
Thank you, Tony! Much appreciated my friend.🪞🕳️💬🙏
It always matters. The why, the how, the because. 🙏🏻🕊️
Exactly. Thank you, my friend. Your time and thoughts are much appreciated. 🪞🕳️💬🙏
Most welcome dear friend 🙏🏻🕊
They say that it is what is not said that matters and so it is in this poem. I love the white between the print in this work. Very nice my friend
Thank you so much, Soren! Your time and your astute analysis, are always appreciated. Indeed, there\'s more conveyed in what\'s not said. Spot on my friend! Much appreciated 🪞🕳️💬🙏
To the point, nail on head time, very nicely done
Thank you, dear friend! Your time and your feedback are much appreciated. I am glad it delivered! 🪞🕳️💬🙏
You are very welcome
Haha!
Right?!?!? As in, WTF? Just love when that question is asked! 🤣 Thank you, my dear friend! 🪞🕳️💬🙏
The blank space before the, 'never mind', says it all, that is, saying nothing. Enough to dampen any, wow. Excellent, my friend.
All the very best,
Tony.
Very right you are, my friend. Thank you so much, Tony, for your time, thoughts, and your gracious words of support. Much appreciated! 🪞🕳️💬🙏
It matters if our initials are OWK. (you knows it 🙂 ).
It sure does! But, what if P and OWK converge? POWK, that's what! Kinda like POW (Brutus felt that), but a K better! 🤣
LOL.
The tantalizing beauty of exquisite brevity and its eloquence. What's left to answer after that? But of course. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a teasing, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
You are most welcome, my dear friend. Glad it resonated and delivered in a...ehem...timely manner. 🤣 Your time and analysis are always deeply appreciated. 🪞🕳️💬🙏
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