Worship.
The void.
Mind
boggling,
crippling
void.
It focuses.
Makes all
take notice.
Can’t be
ignored.
Can’t
look away.
Consternation
envelopes.
Crippling
effects.
Freezing
In place.
The id
pushes
back.
Creating
methods
of coping.
Deflecting
fear.
Fear
of the
void.
The end.
Existence
finite.
Conceptually
untenable.
Worshiping.
Afterlife
creation.
Easing.
Comforting.
One wonders.
If humans
were immortal.
Or, become
immortal.
Would there
be worship?
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Author:
John Prophet (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: May 10th, 2025 07:19
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Poetic Licence
Comments5
Indeed a thought that had not occurred to me until today despite all my exposure to religions of all types. A very thought provoking poem. Loved it John a fave
Thank you Kindly
What we worship is ever before us and to marry that with the concept of Eternity is a reality that will go on in perpetuity๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Thank you for reading.
Most welcome John ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
Fear is the void maybe, fear of the death bed, the unknown, as it were, tempered with worship, superstition and belief. Like, Soren, immortality and the need to worship, never occurred to me. An insightful observation in a most splendid poem.
All the best,
Tony.
Thank you kindly Tony.
John
A very interesting write, asking a very question, I would say if humans were immortal what would they be praying for, enjoyed the read
Thanks for reading PL
John
You are very welcome
We all have our own ways to worship John. As Dave Allen said "May your god go with you."
Andy
And also with you. ๐ Thanks for reading Andy..
John
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