Invisible

Caring dove

Sometimes you just feel a bit invisible 

sometimes 

it’s more a feeling in the mind 

a feeling of I’m here 

but .. 

nobody’s talking 

I’m here 

but I’m not seen really 

even tho I am 

and maybe their all feeling a bit quiet 

or doing something 

but it doesn’t matter 

because in my mind 

I still invisible 

like I’m not being seen 


I know it’s just a feeling 

but I don’t like the feeling … 


and then I’m standing there 

wishing for the company I want 

whilst at the same time 

with the invisible feeling in my head 

 

 

 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 11th, 2025 13:32
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    This poem speaks of that uncomfortable feeling of not being noticed meaning not being cared about. It conveys the feeling well

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou ))
      It’s a feeling I still have sometimes
      I know that the people around me care ..
      but sometimes little things can make me feel those feelings

      But feeling dissociated aswell can be difficult ..

      Thanks

    • Goldfinch60

      I am here and can see you through your words Yellow Rose.

      Andy

    • Poetic Licence

      A touching write of feeling they are not noticed in the world, feeling lonely and not cared for, nicely written and expressed



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