As I walk by My River, I see my Spirit
Flowing before me;
Calmly, serenely, going on forever,
The occasional ripple soon calmed,
As any bad feelings are erased,
Only seeing good in all life.
Natures beauty there for all to enjoy.
As I look back along My River
I see my long life, now behind me,
That has been carried by my Spirit;
A life of love, joy and contentment.
It had its ripples, some severe,
But love and nature calmed them all.
A life of contentment and joy,
Which will forever be with my Spirit.
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Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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Comments7
This recurring river theme is beautiful. River is life🙏🏻🕊️
River certainly is life arqios. thank you.
Andy
Good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
A most peaceful and serene picture painted here Andy. Very calming and reassuring.
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
Lovely read, have a lovely week
Thank you Tobani, you have a good week as well.
Andy
You are very welcome and Thank you
Life as a river is a wonderful idea.Excellent poem mi amigo
It certainly is with My River David.
Andy
Excellent write Andy
Most kind Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
Lovely dear Andy. 🌹
Thank you Teddy,
Andy
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