I'm writing you this letter from Korea.
Sending you a few words from the summit
of the sacred mountain where the sun
is rising.
A flock of lazzy clouds are still floating
in no hurry to cross the China sea.
Immaculate hibiscus flowers blossom
like a thousand schools vying for grace
filling souls with the serenity
of a calm spring morning.
I'm writing you this letter,
lemon and jasmin fragrant.
On the other side of the earth
you"re on your way
to the realm of dreams
I bow to the new dawn.
Yin and Yang become one.
But I hear the gong
calling me back to the temple...
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Author:
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- Published: May 12th, 2025 09:59
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Comments6
A wonderful message of serenity ! congratulation !
Thank you, dear Lorenz!
A beautiful poem with marvelous images of peace and serenity. Very nicely done.
Thank you for your feedback! 😊
Love this! Both in visitation and inner vision. You brought me both!
Thanks so much for your feedback - I truly appreciate it !
A wonderful write, a sense of a beautiful and peaceful landscape, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much for reading and for your support!
You are very welcome
There’s a quiet strength to this piece — thoughtful and gently spiritual. It leaves you with a real sense of calm.
Beautifully written.
Thanks for your feedback!
spiritual and inspirational..enjoyed the beautiful piece of art produced here
Thank you for your review!
you are welcome - have a good day
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