Here’s a beach
a place of sand and sea
a soft golden land lightly living by blue
a soft place that sometimes sits still , almost
yet sometimes is more
helped by another
fragments of soft sand grouped together
to make a sandcastle
something else that’s whole , complete
little bits of sand were once just sitting still
but they had a helping hand
to be a part of something a little different
a group of sand standing a little taller
connected to that place they came from
also held by that place
hoping to stay there for a while
but even if the fragments fall
their still in the same place
and maybe one day
built back up again
with the help of a helpful hand
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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A lovely write, with a helping hand they will be built back up, nicely expressed and written
Thank you 🙂
I have wrote one about sandcastles before , I think maybe this is a little similar
But Thankyou for the comment
Glad you enjoyed the read
You are very welcome
The mind drifts like the current in this poem of helping hands rebuilding what once was and how all of life is a cycle of creation and deterioration. Very nicely done I somehow felt at the beach with the waves crashing
Thank you very much )) I was listening to the radio and it just mentioned the word beach .. so I thought to try writing about it .
Love it
Thankyou
You're Welcome
Those thoughts will always be rebuilt Yellow Rose.
Andy
Thankyou for the kind words
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