One taking their last breaths, the other when forgotten, man suffers two deaths
On this site reside, poets new others tried, feelings of people that write
Goldfinch king with numbers read, Orchidee next in hymns to be sung not said
A poem unread is a poem dead, read other's work your muse to incite
A word unuttered kept inside is a poem that's died, a message never spread
Plant your words in fertile soil, with ink your pen oil, stain of words that bleeds
Spill words on the page, with your poems engage your readers
From life and poets pick your seeds, discarding rocks and unwanted weeds
Planted deep in fertile readers, they'll grow to tall cedars and future leaders
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- Comment from author about the poem: Damnatio memoriae (condemnation of memory) The Roman practice of erasing a person from history by removing any official record of the person from statues or records
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A well constructed poem with a great message extolling the virtues of writing to live forever.
Thanks David for the read. I have noticed that there are so many that post but seldom read on this site and others that I thought it might be good to mention that if one expects to be read one has an equal obligation and opportunity to read others.
Your verses bloom like eternal seeds, ensuring no poem truly dies. A timeless ode to words that breathe and readers who keep them alive.
Thank you so much for the read Mottakeenur for your read of this humble poem and the interpretation that it was intended for. It is most appreciated.
Let no verse fade into silence, no thought wither in the dark. Words breathe when carried forward, stitched into the fabric of time. We are not here to let them die, but to lift them where hands can reach, to scatter them like autumn leaves, where new voices take root and rise. You have been such a stalwart proponent of poetry and reading. Lead the way!🙏🏻🕊️
Thanks so much Cryptic for the read and most poetic response. I have read since small and feel that the wisdom of past generations lies in its books. I so appreciate your reads and interpretations
Books have been my dearest 'friends' over the years. And having written almost as long as I am able to read, realise why! 🙏🏻🕊️
This is so good, there are so many great writers and poems they are missing by not reading on this site, lovely read
Thanks so much Tobani I deeply appreciate the read and comment you and several others need not have read this poem it is like preaching to the choir
Its right for it to be said, it does take time, but there is some great stuff out there, take care
Go on - you will end up offending someone, despite wrapping it up in your usual metaphor☺️ Used to irritate me, but think poets come (and go) for different reasons - some want to engage (like moi), others don't.
The Roman practice (your comment) is of course a hot topic today.....
Thanks Dave I do appreciate your reviews and responses and you don't have to worry about me I have a thick skin and take few things seriously in this world. None the less I really do cherish your comments
Cheers, man.
The poem explores the importance of poetry and the act of sharing one's thoughts and feelings through written words. It emphasizes that both the act of writing and the engagement of readers are crucial for a poem to truly live and resonate. The notion of "Damnatio memoriae" suggests that forgetting is akin to death, and thus, sharing poetry is a means of preserving memory and sentiment. Your poem aims to inspire both poets and readers to engage with one another, emphasizing that the act of sharing poetry is vital to keeping the art form alive and relevant. It serves as a call to action to not only create but also to read and appreciate the works of others.
Thank you Friendship you have very nicely summarized the essence of the poem and it is most appreciated
Future readers.😉 Nice work!
Thanks so much John for the read and comment it is definitely appreciated
We must also love poets of supermarket !
Thanks Lorenz for the read and comment I appreciate your support and understanding it is most appreciated
Ahh, bit of French there - Damnatio...... A couple of good words for KP each new day, I reckon! lol.
A bit like I'm reading of the Reformation in the mid 1500's in the UK, and Damnatio memoriae - erasing Roman Catholic images, shrines, rites, and other paraphernalia, or at least that was the aim. They hid objects, etc, sneakily, in some cases. Then Queen Mary I brought the RC stuff back, then Queen Elizabeth I and Protestantism. (I can't see on your profile if you're in the UK or not.) History lesson over! lol.
Thanks Orchi for the read and comment. No Orchi I'm on the other side of the pond sometimes north in Florida and sometimes south in Brazil
Tremendous. Powerful and very well crafted.
Thank you very much Thomas
Yes. Many who post don't end up reading, which is sad to me. Reading is as beneficial as writing, imho. The two feed each other. Brilliant use of a Roman custom as a metaphor. Perfectly done. Faved. 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan for your review and most kind words they are always so motivating.
You are very welcome, my friend!
Neat poem nicely done. I like it.
Thank you so much for your read and comment it is most appreciated
Wonderful words soren, may those words within us be there forever.
Andy
Thanks for the review Gold it is always appreciated as well as your positive comments.
No words to express how deeply felt this is
Thanks for the read Shamrocker your read and comment are deeply appreciated
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