This can't go on!

orchidee

This can't go on!

Thinking, I mean.....

There's far too much of it going on

People being sensible, wise, prudent, etc

It has to stop!

As too much thinking (or even a little)

Can be a dangerous thing!

 

Of course, it don't affect me hardly at all

As I've only three brain cells

And none, when they go on holiday

I dunno half the time

When they'll be back

 

'No change there then for you', says KP to me

Returning an insult to me

Of one of the 5 million I give her each day!

Has to be done

To keep her from being too big for her boots

 

Wot? Do I discover you thinking there?

OK, you can think, I will allow it

If you think up fab poems!

Heehee.

 

I was gonna post a video with this

But one is over an hour long

That's FAR too much thinking! lol.

  • Author: orchidee (Online Online)
  • Published: May 20th, 2025 01:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem, of sorts, got you thinking?!
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 15
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  • arqios

    Post it anyway! We can always stop the playback 🤓🙏🏻🕊️

    • orchidee

      Thank you A. lol.

      • arqios

        Welcome O 🙏🏻🕊️

      • Poetic Licence

        To much thinking can not only be tiring it can also be dangerous!!!, enjoyed the read

        • orchidee

          Thank you PL. lol.

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome

            • orchidee

              I will start believing it's all true, if I write much more of this rubbish! LOL. They will say to me: 'Since when were you human? How did you get on this site?' heehee.

            • sorenbarrett

              Another fun read Orchi where too much thinking leads to confusion and it is better to just cut the line rather than try to untangle it. Good one Orchi

              • orchidee

                Thank you SB. lol.

              • Salvia.S

                This is hilarious! You've nailed the humor and playfulness, making it an entertaining read. Great job!

                • orchidee

                  Thank you S. lol.

                • Doggerel Dave

                  The level of abstraction is amazing.... how you managed to complete that piece without once mentioning idiocy demonstrates a mastery of your craft few can aspire to...........

                  • orchidee

                    Thank you D. Sir Orchi NS at his daftest?! lol.

                    • Doggerel Dave

                      No neva be complacent. Always strive. I have certainty that there are no limits to your nuttiness. I would not have awarded the 'Sir' if I had thought otherwise.

                      • orchidee

                        Call me 'Sir', call me 'Your Lordship', call me anything within reason. Only don't call me Sue - random name chosen there! lol.

                        • Doggerel Dave

                          More nonsense. You were/are a Johnny Cash fan.

                        • Goldfinch60

                          You are right Orchi, thinking is dangerous.

                          Andy

                          • orchidee

                            Thank you Gold. Yep. lol.

                          • Tom Dylan

                            Nice one, Orchi. This made me smile. 😀

                            • orchidee

                              Thanks Tom. lol.



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