Broken Dreams.
Secret chambers of the mind.
Reality is born to be unkind
Words forbidden to be spoken
Ghosts haunting the corners.
Dreams of peace are broken.
Tobani May 2025
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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The words being forbidden struck a chord with me… at home we had only three responses allowed: 1- yes 2- no and 3- I don’t know. 🙏🏻🕊️
I totally relate to that, thank you for the feedback
Most welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
Such depth in so few lines—your poetry cuts straight to the soul. A powerful reflection on the fragility of hope.
Thank you for your kind feedback, very much appreciated
Life is good at braking dreams.It almosts promises to let you down. A well constructed powerful poem
Thank you
Wisdom in verse feels prophetic in some way but poetic in every way. Loved it
Thank you
Your poem is hauntingly beautiful! The imagery is vivid and evocative, and it effectively conveys a sense of longing and despair. Well done!!!
Thank you, very much appreciated
We all have those secret chambers in our minds Tobani.
Andy
Enjoy your day
Secret chambers of the mind... how true that is. Reality can be cruel, but revealing, too. I like the message your poem conveys. I thought about the hidden secrets of the mind. Thank you for the strong reality check. Excellent!
Thank you for your kind words, enjoy the rest of your day
This is haunting but I like it.
Thank you, very much appreciated
So relatable. The mind is such a deep place
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