Groundhog Day

Caring dove

When your days 

and your feelings just feel the same 

the days feel the same 

your mind feels the same 

you go out to the shops 

you go walk around the estate 

and it’s like your stuck 

In the same place 

with the same feelings 

 

its like Groundhog Day 

on repeat 

 

yoir going to shops 

tedious 

your walking around estate 

boring 

 

your not havjng the company you want 

and your stuck 

 

isn’t making you happy 

feeling like this 

doing these things 

feeling like this 

yet and so it continues 

and you get tired

yoir mind gets tired 

 

you feel like a stranger to yourself 

things feel strange 

 

isn’t how some others feel in their days 

 

they can feel as they wish 

go where they wish 

have the company they want 

 

it’s like being a caterpillar 

wanting the wings 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Have had that feeling at times and Groundhog day was one of my favorite movies. Stuck in a loop of time he was able to find how to improve and be a better person through repetition. Fun read

    • Caring dove

      Yeah , never liked that film

      But yeah I get a bit sad sometimes with how I feel / experience things lack of confidence etc

      Some people know I’m upset yet won’t bother making any effort either

      Others are walking around with confidence and having amazing days with new experiences

      And your wandering why their allowed them
      And your not

    • Poetic Licence

      How it is easy to get in that cycle of feeling lonely and sad, the longer it goes on the harder it is to break, wish you all the best, nicely expressed write

      • Caring dove

        I don’t always feel that way .. but sometimes I do yeah ,things can get me down

        Thankyou for the kind words

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Goldfinch60

          That time will come Yellow Rose when all will fit together and life will be wonderful.

          Andy

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Such a great movie. And yes, I have felt this way before. Very relatable. Loved it.

          • Caring dove

            Yeah , I think it’s difficult to deal with feelings that upset you .. and to feel you wish for more to be different but you feel a bit stuck ..

            It can get ‘ boring ‘
            Even dealing with similar feelings over and over again .. Tiring , I guess .

            Thanks so much for the kind comment ..

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              Indeed. You are most welcome, my friend!



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