Beneath the silver moonlit skies so clear,
My River gently winds through tranquil land,
Its murmurs whisper truths for hearts to hear,
A melody shaped by love’s tender hand.
Its waters shimmer with affection’s glow,
Reflecting dreams that blossom in its tide,
Each wave declares the depth of all I know,
A boundless passion I cannot divide.
Through seasons fierce and calm, it steadfast streams,
Its course unbroken, flowing ever true,
A mirror to the constancy of dreams,
A beacon to the love I bear for you.
Oh, may My River’s love forever run,
A timeless bond beneath the setting sun.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The love of My River is eternal
- Category: Reflection
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You are a master at the sonnet game, Andy. Shakespeare would have appreciated the continuance of his work.
Plus with both Mary and the river....
Most kind Dave and very much appreciated. Thank you.
Andy
Beautifully written—gentle, heartfelt, and full of love. The river metaphor flows naturally, and the emotion feels sincere and timeless. A lovely tribute.
Much appreciated Salvia, thank you.
Andy
An eternal good write, and classical video Gold.
Thank you Orchi.
A beautiful sonnet of love with a lovely theme of a river or love so to speak.
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
A wonderful poem celebrating the love of a RIver. A beautiful tribute mi amigo.Very well constructed as well
So kind David, thank you.
Andy
A wonderful write of the ever flowing love in their life, enjoyed the read
Thank you Tobani, may our lives flow forever.
Andy
I hope they do, you are very welcome
The Moon and the River, these are together an excellent pair. 🕊🙏🏻
They certainly are arqios, thank you.
Andy
Lovely 🌹
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Wonderful words, Andy. The emotion comes though.
Most kind Tom, thank you.
Andy
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