Notice of absence from Poetic Licence
Peace should be for everyone, not just the chosen few.
Peace should be for everyone, not just the chosen few.
Broken Mirror.
A Broken Mirror Is Not
Bad Luck.
It Is Just a Different Way
Of Looking at
Yourself.
Tobani April 2025
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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I really like your words here. Beautiful metaphor, beautiful thought, beautiful words.
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Indeed it is broken and gone to pieces lol This poem puts a positive spin on loss and what is gained. Very positive and progressive. If we could only put such a perspective on all elements in our life it would be so much easier and the load lighter. I wonder if such a mirror would see a person as a multiple personality. Ah just thinking.
If only we could and probably, thank you for your feedback, enjoy the rest of your day
This is very true mi amigo. A clever and wise poem
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Such a thoughtful write. Well done!
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Many different ways, shapes and angles🙏🏻🕊
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Most welcome 🙏🏻🕊️
Excellent.
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Hahaha! Peering at oneself in the shards of a perfect reflection, when the situation itself is a metaphor of damnation in the fables is an interesting predicament indeed. Fascinating and disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Metaphor what's a metaphor for!!!, thank you for your kind feedback, very much appreciated
A different way of looking at yourself differently. Good short write.
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Fragmenting the reflection, perhaps. Excellent. Regards.
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Indeed, or...perhaps it is not the mirror that is broken after all. We're all a little broken, some more than others, so we can't judge the mirror! Or so an aspiring Wise Man Say 🤣. Wonderfully profound poem and deserves to be more faved than it already is, my dear friend! I have now helped that cause! 👏🌹
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You are most welcome.
Maybe you get to see the reflections of every part of yourself.
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Bosch! Nailed it. Nicely done. 😀
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Great thought.
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there's always more than one way to look at things, nicely done!!
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