I named my pet monkey Moses
because he parts the peanut shells
with the precision of scripture,
lifting his small hands in blessing
before launching into his pilgrimage
across the bright, tiled kitchen,
a banana clutched, golden and faintly
radiant in the afternoon light.
I named him Moses for the comedy
of it too, this small prophet leaping
atop the fridge, surveying the land
of cereal boxes, his promised domain.
But late at night, as he sleeps,
curled in the basket by the door,
I wonder who exactly he is leading
and if I am the desert after all.
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- Published: May 29th, 2025 09:44
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Comments5
That's too fun!!! It wouldn't be half so charming if you hadn't described him and his behaviors and your assessment to perfection so delightfully. Oh! I love it! I love him! Beautifully rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a delicious poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing!
Thank You Missy I appreciate your feedback and yes it was a lot of fun to write
Moses and he sleeps in a basket, parting peanut shells. Does he bring down plagues, give commandments follow a pillar of fire or eat manna, maybe banana. A fun read and endearing I hope he reaches the promised land.
Awesome
I really enjoyed this well written entertaining read, thank you
I think all of us are the desert, at least part of the time. Not sure who the monkey is though. Nice.
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