Perfection a dew drop, a crystal ball with a magnifying top
Its surface a rainbow shows endless colors without stop
Transparent, life giving, forgiving, bends but doesn't break
Born on wings of night, pearls in sun's light, wash nature's eyes awake
Manna from heaven, nature's bread leaven, a baptism that glistens
Cleansed of night's death, in misty morning's breath, to a choir of drops listens
Creeping into the ground without a sound to its place of birth
Each path taken just to reawaken, trapped in a cycle on this earth
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And as I listen to the perfect nature in this poem, I feel alive. 🌹 Beautiful my dear sorrenbarret 🌹
Thank you my kind friend for your words of encouragement they are always most appreciated
Winter is the time we get dew as the temperature drops.It can be a beautiful process as this poem explains. Powerful images here
Thank you David for your review and kind words of support. Where I am every morning even in the driest summers there is dew that may soon disappear after the sun raises.
Thank you for an enjoyable read and brightening up my day
Thank you Tobani for read and most kind words. Have a wonderful day
You are very welcome
Thus, the dew's journey started from the earth, went up to the clouds, fell to earth and returns up. It is indeed a cycle. A cycle that is vital for many living creatures.
Thank you Soman for the review. Indeed that is the main point of the poem and we all recycle. Your words are most appreciated
Your poem masterfully weaves the concept of perfection through the majestic lens of water, particularly in the breathtaking form of dewdrops. It celebrates the resplendent beauty, life-giving properties, and cyclical nature of water, underscoring its vital role in nurturing life and its profound connection to the natural world. This poem also serves as a poignant reminder of the beauty and significance of water in the natural world, urging us to cherish the small wonders of life that contribute to the larger cycle of existence. It illuminates themes of renewal and interconnectedness, inviting introspection on our relationship with the natural world.
Thank you so much Friendship for your interpretation and kind words. It is most appreciated.
Excellent images!🙏🏻🕊
Thank you Cryptic appreciate it
Ohh, only you and I are perfect! lol. Oh and Fido too.
KP won't like that. Thanks so much for the read Orchi
This is absolutely beautiful!!!!
A fave
Thank you so much Salvia you words mean a great deal
Nice one soren
Reflective like sweet vibrant dewdrops
Thanks Reynaldo for the read and comment it is always most appreciated
It's funny, because I can almost imagine this is what God saw looking down following Creation and saying, "It is good.". The way the earth nourishes itself and sustains the cycles of birth, life, death, rebirth...awe-inspiring! As is this poem. Perfect in my book and a fave. 🌹👏
Thank you my friend you words are always encouraging and most appreciated.
Nothing more Perfect or Beautiful than Nature.
Well Said.
Thank you Kevin for the review and most encouraging words they are most appreciated
Perfection is for what we aim in life soren, if we reach perfection where would we then go?
Andy
Thank yoiu Gold for the review and interpretation it is always appreciated
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