When you feel you can do things
you can go where you wish
go to the seaside alone
have fun on a trip out somewhere you have never been before
with someone else or alone
because you feel you can
because you can
like the sun able to shine
a flower able to blossom
a butterfly allowed to fly
when you feel you can
then you feel more freedom
maybe …
( it feels like the ones feeling like they can do something get more of the experiences and can do as they wish .. I guess you need more confidence in life
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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A lovely write, sensitive and caring, its the confidence you have in yourself that matter's as that gets stronger your confidence in life will to, enjoy your evening
Yeah but some people don’t have so much confidence in themselves ..
Lucky those that have more and can do whatever they wish
Thankyou very much ))
And you )
You are very welcome
Confidence is the main theme in this poem. A good read that proposes it as a remedy to mediocrity. Very nice
I think we all deserve more experiences and / but it seems that the ones that are confident or feel capable experience more of those things
But it’s not always our fault if we lack d confidence and why should we be missing out
When some others are experiencing more and more
Thanks for the kind comment
Taking those steps in life are so important Yellow Rose, I have taken many steps in my long life and am so happy where I have reached and I know there will be more wonder ahead.
Andy
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