Business Class.

Goldfinch60



One day it will come,

Come to us all.

As we depart this earth

The seat is there for us,

The reservation is confirmed.

We will not be late

As the flight is always on time.

Our luggage will be loaded,

It will be all our good deeds.

Our passport is our humanity,

And our love will be our visa.

So in life do your best

And then we will travel to heaven,

Travel in business class.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 7th, 2025 00:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: Always do good in life and spread the love.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 27
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  • orchidee

    I heard something. supposedly true. One said 'Of course, you know your Manager has been busy on holiday, making business calls for the Company; you should be grateful to him'. More like - swanning about on the beach - as he was on his phone on a sofa in his office one day, when I needed to see him about something. A case of 'Pull the other one, it's got bells on!'

  • sorenbarrett

    I rather expect that I will be traveling economy class on that flight, cramped and with very little choice of a overcooked meal. Good write Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Surely not soren all will be fine. Thank you for your comment.

      Andy

    • David Wakeling

      I hope this comes true.Certainly the most positive view of life and the hereafter.I enjoyed reading

      • Goldfinch60

        Most kind David, so do I, thank you.

        Andy

      • Teddy.15

        Ah I thought this was about a one way ticket first class to the Maldives, and in some ways it is 🏝️ lovely

        • Goldfinch60

          The Maldives is obviously your heaven Teddy.

          Andy

        • Poetic Licence

          A postive write, I have my seat reserved in the baggage are!!!, enjoyed the read

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you Tobani, see you there.

            Andy

            • Poetic Licence

              You are very welcome

            • Tony36

              Excellent write Andy



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