Into Our New Life.

Goldfinch60



We live our life to the end,

To the end of time on this world.

We look back on it

And see the good and the bad

The good and the bad that has been with us.

Some things we have done wrong

But those things cannot be fixed.

Seeing them makes us realise,

Realise that those things have taught us,

Taught us how to move forward

And let us live each new day

Better than the one before.

So when we reach our end,

The end of our time on this world

We know that we have learned,

Learned the right,

The right to live our new life in glory,

In glory and understanding.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 9th, 2025 01:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: Ensure that you learn from the mistakes you have made in life.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 14
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • sorenbarrett

    Another great poem directing us to look for the good and live each life accordingly. Lovely thought Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Most kind soren, thank you.

      Andy

    • Poetic Licence

      A positive write, if i learnt from all my mistakes, i would be a well educated person!!!, enjoyed the read

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Tobani, we do learn from our mistakes no matter what.

        Andy

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • David Wakeling

          Glory and understanding are a great couple.In fact I have quite a few mistakes I have tried to learn from.Great poem made me think

          • Goldfinch60

            Much appreciated David, thank you.

            Andy

          • Tony36

            Excellent write Andy

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Tony.

              Andy

              • Tony36

                You're welcome



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