Notice of absence from Tristan Robert Lange
Living in the Pocono Mountains has its perks, no doubt. Internet connectivity ain't one of them. Please forgive my tardiness as of late. The tech gods be thundering!
Living in the Pocono Mountains has its perks, no doubt. Internet connectivity ain't one of them. Please forgive my tardiness as of late. The tech gods be thundering!
I have a love—
Deep, long, wide;
However you take it,
It is yours—
Forever.
Yes. You. Yours.
Not a love that is for one,
But a profound, pulsating,
Profusely bleeding,
Swimmingly lost in the stars,
Hold each other till we’re one;
Yet amazingly,
Miraculously,
Movingly, uniquely ourselves
Kind of love.
This love is mine to give
And anyone’s to receive.
While not all will,
I forever love them still.
Will you join me, love?
Will you
Join me,
Love?
All, love, is welcome.
All love
is welcome.
All love is well, so come
With
Me.
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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Offline) - Published: June 15th, 2025 06:28
- Category: Love
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Love the siri voice at the copyright tag! LOL. Good to be hearing you read your poem. There is an intense timbre in your voice, like deeply. imprinted footprints on the shore or fossilised on stone. The background traffic sounds makes such an awesome negative space on this canvas.🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you, my friend! LOL! Yeah, I somehow messed up the copyright tag in the original recording, so I rerecorded it—and of course, the sounds and cadence shift every time you hit the button! Still me, but Siri me I guess? 🤣 I really appreciate you listening and reflecting on both the voice and the background traffic noise. I originally recorded it just for posterity’s sake, but then thought—why not let my actual voice emerge? LOL! I'm so glad it all came together. Truly appreciate your words, my dear friend! 🌠💖🫂🙏
It did finally come together! Gave me the distinct impression that people tend to listen to you and that you are the sort to make your words count and have a deep regard for diction and phrasing. 🕊🙏🏻
A wonderful and broad offering that calls out to all. A most giving and resplendent write that feel almost religious.
Thank you, Soren. Much appreciated, my dear friend. I am glad it delivered in such ways. Your time, your thoughts, your support are deeply appreciated and inpsiring. 🌠💖🫂🙏
That has a dark and slightly religious feel to it, listening to you reading the poem it reminded of the calm start to a movie that you know is going to end in horror, although about love I can't help thinking its a bit sinister, gripping read, enjoyed
Neat take, my friend. While I wrote it from a place of sincere love, your interpretation is insightful—and I can absolutely see how the poem might lead one in that direction. Ah, the beauty of art: to convey and inspire in spite of as much as because of the artist. That’s what makes this so rewarding! Thank you again for sharing your time, your take, and your presence with me, dear Tobani. Have a great day! 🌠💖🫂🙏
You are very welcome
I thought this was about Obi..... Don't explain the title to me! LOL.
I knew you would, Pop! LOL! Eyes on the title without its context...ooh, I love a double entendre! 🤣 Thank you as always for your time, your read and your daftness, my friend. I would not have it any other way, and I mean it! 🌠💖🫂🙏
We, us two, sound like those who did the jokes for the old 'Carry On' films! lol.
Indeed, we do! 🤣🤭
Looming out of the grace of love, you open your arms to us all. What a beautiful welcome. How could one not resist. I am so delighted, I read this, Tristan, truly.
May the world love you back,
Tony.
Your love in return means more than the world’s, my friend. I mean that for all people—but especially for those who respond. Because love always responds. Thank you for your grace, your presence, and your love, dear poet. It's the only way to transform the universe around us, even if we can’t change the universe itself. Thank you—deeply. 🌠💖🫂🙏
—Tristan
Wow not only special poetry but special to meet your voice, love will come. So very powerful. 🌹
Thank you, dear Teddy. Yeah, it felt like the right time to let my "voice" emerge. 🤣 I am so very glad that the poem delivered and grateful for your time and feedback. Much appreciated! 🌠💖🫂🙏
This is truly beautiful—gentle, open, and full of love. It feels like an embrace in words. I absolutely love it. Wonderfully written dear Tittu 🌹
Thank you, dear Salvia. Your words humble, encourage and inspire me. Thank you for being so authentically you and for your support. 🌠💖🫂🙏
it could only be you [no need for 'all rights reserved' -lol]who could come out with such generosity of spirit offering unconditional love in such a nice and tender way
enjoyed the beautiful rendering of the lovely poem
Aww. Thank you so much, my friend. Your words mean a lot to me. While I am, of course, not perfect, I certainly try to share love as much and as often as I possibly can...and trying to grow even more in doing so. Thank you again for your time, your feedback and your encouragement. All very much appreciated. 🌹👏
And yeah, "All Rights Reserved" sounds weird on a poem about sharing love! Irony definitely not lost! I guess I reserve my right to share it! 🤣
of course you have the right to reserve your 'rights' while still sharing and caring
that's the way to go - and keep walking that path
God bless
Amen! LOL! Truth! Thank you friend. You too! I appreciate you and am thankful for God crossing our paths. God bless you too!
good morning. So am I - grateful for all the beautiful people i got to interact with on this forum - have learnt so much from everyone
Have a lovely day, and hope the weekend is peaceful.
Same here. That feeling is most mutual. You too, my friend! 🌹👏
Amen to that.. have a beautiful and productive weekend. Take care
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