I 'm so bored in my milky suburb
somewhere on 5th street
in the middle of the point nemo.
Who will draw me a sheep
not promised for sacrifice ?
Perhaps an aviator
in need of inspiration ,
dreaming on a north sea dune ?
I feel in some tropical mood .
The graceful pleiades
spinning in the infinite galactic poem
greet me ,going on their way ...
I also like distracted and dishevelled comets.
So sad ! I don't have any roses to seduce...
I would like to leave this earth ,
full of my empty heart ...
And become a baobab gardener !
In the saturday night ,improvise
long sax duets under a Jupiter moon light.
You see ! I'm so crazy ,I add characters
to the story !
But maybe you've forgotten them ?
And left Alice in wonderland ...
You know,its all about bonding
and not just with a drunkard...
It's very difficult ,even with
an instruction manual !
Because of this we lose the thread of theme...
You don't really know ,if you're
a little prince wondering about tenderness
or a fox in the doldrums giving answers
to grown-up questions ...
But please ,if you see him ...
Let him know that I'm waiting his return...
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Author:
lorenz (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
A tender, ironic, and profound monologue of a soul that has slipped away into a world of dreams...
A simple and universal message '' I'm waiting for you..! ''
Loved the Little Prince and Alice in Wonderland. The second from childhood and the first from adulthood. They are used so cleverly in this poem to enhance the meaning and well done too. Most lovely
This poem is a playful song of loneliness and ambiguous tenderness !
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