Ocean Pacific
What terrific
Power moves
Under your floor?
Is your sword
About to be drawn?
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Author:
Mutley Ravishes (
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Now this can be taken more than one way and I love the clever title. I remember that series. Is it volcanic eruption or something more? Nicely written.
Six Million Dollar Man, and Monkey Magic too!
I spent more time on the title than on the rhyme! Yes, it's volcanic eruption, but how about the timing of the (possible) eruptions?!
I feel it is about to erupt, enjoyed the read
I heard about these twins off the California and Philippine coasts. Well, time will tell. If it happens the timing is out of this world. I don't say this flippantly, as I live near the Ring of Fire.
Love the word play in the title. This brief poem packs a powerful punch and says more than what appears on the screen. Excellent question to close it too! Me thinks so! Well done, friend. 👏🌹
Thanks a million!
You are most welcome, my friend!
Excellent write
Thanks, Tony.
You're welcome
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