Last night, it came in a dream,
With a suitcase of hopes and a distant gleam.
To a land unknown, I made my way,
The flight was long, but faith did stay.
Then suddenly, I saw your face,
Blue eyes that time could not erase.
Like Juliet seeing Romeo near,
A love once lost now felt so clear.
I walked to you and said my name,
You spoke yours, I felt a flame.
In that moment, love made sense,
Like fate had dropped the last defense.
We shared a path, the same direction,
As if God drew this connection.
But then the night slipped out of sight, And I had to leave you with the light.
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Author:
Elizabeth Ross 4 (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments3
A beautiful, romantic poem, with words that go to the heart. A clear progression of the romance, but the final lines point to a separation. Is it a temporary separation ?...
A love poem of a love lost and in metaphor possibly with death's separation. Nicely written
Beautifully written poem of love and longing, I sense for someone that may have passed, nicely expressed and written
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