Tony what do you think when you look at me
An ocean
Are you calling me fat
Not at all
I say an ocean
Because when you speak
The words have depth and meaning
Not shallow and worthless
Each word you speak
A pure wave of truth
Each word you speak
A whirlpool
Pulling me in so I want you hear more
I say an ocean
Because there is treasure
Hidden in all you say
The truth within your words surge
Like a mighty tide
That crashes upon
Everything that is false
Within this world
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This Tony is a poem that requires several reads and some time pondering. Deep it washes over in the first reading. Nicely done
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Tony, you are a blessing to everyone on here. If not, they're the problem, not you! I'll say that out right. And this poem, as all of them do, show your heart. A wonderful heart it is, my friend! As my poem said, you really are a wizard! Keep the magic up, mate! Great job on this. A fave!
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You are most welcome, my friend.
Excellent.
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An ocean of truth. That is a lot. Quite a good tribute compadre.
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Wonderful words Yony and so meaningful.
Andy
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Excellent writing, my friend. Thanks for sharing. Cheers!
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