Poetry is personal,
Prophetic, powerful,
Pleasing, perturbing,
Pandemoniously Pandora’s
Pleasure package of pain,
Pointed processing of the profound,
Profession of protest,
Punching passivity while
Pacifying procrastination.
Poetry is people
Plying people through a portal,
Paper or otherwise,
Prepared through porous lives
Possessed by prodigious purpose.
© 2025 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
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Quite the feat to get it all in one poem!
Thank you, friend! I didnโt even intend to, but they kept rolling! It did get challenging once I realized I was going for P words. But, as the muse dictates. ๐ Your time and feedback are much appreciated. ๐ชถ๐๐๐
That's very clever, bet that wasn't easy, enjoyed the read
Thank you my friend. Glad the poem resonated and delivered. It was weird how this one came about. Had the idea of writing a poem about poetry and then the pโs started rolling. But yeah, it got challenging once I realized I was going for mostly p words. ๐ Thanks again, Tobani! Much appreciated! ๐ชถ๐๐๐
You are very welcome
Positively perfect alliteration nicely done Tristan. Every once in a while I get this alliteration urge it becomes like a chocolate binge. Loved this one P's are not that easy.
Thank you, kindly, Soren! So glad delivered and resonated! Indeed, they are not. ๐ Your time, thoughts and support are always appreciated! ๐ชถ๐๐๐
so creative! I'd like to hear someone rap this lol ๐
Yes!!!! You just made my night! Anyone in mind? Eminem almost immediately came up because of his skills, but I confess I am not too versed in rap! ๐คฃ whoever wants to rap it, feel free with a name drop! ๐ Anywho, thanks so much hayleigh. For your time, your feedback, and for cheering me up. ๐ชถ๐๐๐
anytime, Tristan! and I'd loveeeee to Eminem rap it lol!
YESSSS! Me too!
Sheesh, man. Guess you had a fun time with that letter. Almost as if you've drawn up the framework for a much larger, fuller piece hereby, what a curious, intriguing, fascinating, pretty little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks my friend! Yeah. I totes had fun with this letter. Or at least exhausted the need to alliterate with it anytime soon! ๐คฃ Your time and feedback are much appreciated! ๐ชถ๐๐๐
Yay! Double Fave: poetry is peripatetic. Poetry, like the peripatetic thinker, never stands still. It walksโsometimes lightly, sometimes burdenedโthrough time, memory, landscape, and language. To say poetry is peripatetic by nature is to acknowledge its instinct to roam: from mind to page, from reader to reader, from private confession to universal revelation.
Yessss! Completion in your comment! Rock on, my poetic friend! ๐ชถ๐๐๐
Excellent write Tristan
Thank you, Tony!!! ๐ชถ๐๐๐
You're welcome
Alliterative masterpiece, You know where I stand on the rest...........๐
Yes I do! ๐ And thank you, Dave! Much appreciated! ๐ชถ๐๐๐
Good write T. Us two should know another poem - Popeye's Progress. Don't answer that - or rather, don't write that poem! heehee.
Yeah! ๐คฃ I might just heed your advice a lot more immediately than I did with โturn the light on.โ ๐คฃ๐คญ
Whatever you do, don't write that Popeye's Progress poem - swoon! lol. But why not, you say. It will only be about spinach. Hmmm. ๐๐คฃ
Lol! Indeed. I hear that spinach goes good withโฆermโฆback to you Orchi for that โhow not to acknowledge that statementโ segment. ๐คฃ
This is so a powerful and creative !!!! The use of the letter "P" is clever and gives it a nice rhythm. Each line shows a different side of what poetry can be. It's thoughtful and interesting. Very well written dear Tittu โค๏ธ
A fave ๐น
Thank you, dear Salvia. Much appreciated my friend. Glad the P's and the poem delivered. ๐ชถ๐๐๐
pleasing poem - professionally prepared
A thumbs up here for you..
Professionally presented! I see what you did there! ๐ Love the alliteration my friend! ๐โค๏ธ Thank you for reading and commenting in the spirit of the poem. Made my day! โ๏ธ๐ฆด๐๏ธ๐๐
always happy to appreciate good work
have a great weekend..take care
You too!
Magnum opus.
You spent your all litrary treasure.
ALLITERATION ..... praiseworthy
Thank you, my dear friend! Those were about all the P's I could come with! ๐คฃ I am so glad the poem delivered and that you enjoyed. I am humbled by your praise! Thanks again! โ๏ธ๐ฆด๐๏ธ๐๐
You are very welcome.....
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