Our Love Tanka.

Goldfinch60



She is always there,

The lady I love so much.

Our love is so strong,

It gets stronger every day.

Our love will be forever.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 27th, 2025 00:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: Mary and I just do not believe how strong our love is.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 33
  • Users favorite of this poem: Priya Tomar
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Gold.

  • sorenbarrett

    A wonderful proclamation of love that rings out of this poem

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you soren, so kind.

      Andy

    • David Wakeling

      Such a devoted husband it is inspirational to see.Well done

      • Goldfinch60

        Much appreciated David, thank you.

        Andy

      • Poetic Licence

        A very lucky couple, enjoyed the read

        • Goldfinch60

          We certainly feel that we are very lucky Tobani, thank you.

          Andy

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome

          • arqios

            Here in lies the inspiration of the next generation. Most enjoyable and uplifting Andy 🕊️🙏🏻

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you arqios, very much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Good write, Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jerry,

                Andy

              • Mottakeenur Rehman

                Your words beautifully capture eternal love's glow—so heartfelt and true. May your bond grow stronger with each passing day!

                • Goldfinch60

                  So kind Mottakeenur, very much appreciated.

                  Andy

                • Tony36

                  Excellent write Andy

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Tony.

                    Andy

                    • Tony36

                      You're welcome



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