Vivid rays pierce through the sky,
Every corner bathed in golden light.
Radiance dances on the earth below,
Yearning for shade where cool winds blow.
Heat embraces the land with fervent might,
Opulent hues paint the midday bright.
Torrid waves shimmer across the plain,
Sunlit hours bring joy and pain.
Under its gaze, life stirs and thrives,
Nature blooms where its warmth arrives.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 29th, 2025 01:15
- Comment from author about the poem: It is getting so hot!!
- Category: Reflection
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Comments9
A hot write Gold!
Thanks Orchi, it certainly is hot!
Andy
I hear it's hotting up!
Yes it is 2781. Too hot for me.
Andy
Beautiful dear Andy, enjoy the tropical moment 🏝️ 🤣
Much appreciated Teddy, thank you.
Andy
Now that's a splendid poem for this time of year Andy Acrostic and with good rhyme as a bonus.
Appreciate your words soren, thank you.
Andy
What a beautiful description of the coming warm weather.I really enjoyed reading.Made me feel good.
So glad you feel good David, thank you.
Andy
May the sun hang around for a while, enjoyed the read
Much appreciated Tobani.
Andy
You are very welcome
your poem resonates with us because summers here are extremely hot too
wonderful description - thanks for sharing
Thank you for your understanding words Nafisa.
Andy
you are always most welcome
have a great day
Excellent write
Thank you Tony.
Andy
You're welcome
Got enough out of your poem today to stay warm for about a minute and a half, Andy - it's bloody freezing down here!
Glad I warmed you up for a minute and a half Dave, I hope you can stay warm.
Andy
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