Fifty years have graced your noble stride,
A journey carved with wisdom's steady hand.
Through fleeting storms and moments magnified,
You've shaped your path upon life's shifting sand.
My boy who once would dream of worlds untold,
Now stands a pillar, strong and ever wise.
Each step you've taken worth more than gold,
Resilience etched beneath life's vast skies.
My son, whose heart holds kindness deep and true,
The years to come will bloom as seasons pass.
With every sunrise, may your strength renew,
And moments cherished grow like verdant grass.
I raise a toast to fifty years you've earned,
A life of lessons lived, and love returned.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It is my son's fiftieth birthday today, Happy Birthday Simon.
- Category: special-occasion
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A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Happy birthday my dear Sax. 💜
Thank you Teddy, I will tell him.
Andy
Happy birthday, Simon! Indeed a special occasion. Blessings, Andy 🕊️🙏🏻
Thank you arqios, I will relay your message.
Andy
Most welcome Andy🕊🙏🏻
Wow where has the time gone? A wonderful tribute to your son. Happy Birthday Simon.
It certainly moves fast DAvid, thank you.
Andy
A beautiful commemorative poem of tribute. Nicely penned Andy
Most kind soren, thank you.
Andy
Many happy returns
Thank you Tobani.
Andy
You are very welcome
Happy birthday Chat GPT !
This is great. Full of understanding and pride. My son turns 50 next year. Hope I cam do as well. Or, maybe, I 'll send him a humorous card, like he does for me.
Thanks for the reminder. You wrote a wonderful poem. - Phil A.
Thank you Phil, yes banter is so prominent with us both as well.
Andy
Wordsworth - poet of nature.
He worshipped nature.
Tennyson's nature is " red in tooth and claw "
If your poetry has metaphors , imagery similar to Romantic poets, Really you are a great poet , born poet
Indian poet R K Ramanujan' s poetry famous for socio- cultural themes.
If your poetry has scent of cultural flowers , your poetry depicts your versatille genius ....
You provided a good ,complete analysis. You highlighted social relationship in the age of social media
Good job
Very well
Much appreciated Priya.
Andy
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