we submit ourselves in guise
resolute within
although questioning
always fearful, ne’er tearful
and sorely apprehensive
from which we have developed
pattern to routine
one individual, then two
and soon, a chain reaction
it’s drab and dull, you’d complain
one other curse to face
that we all acquire at birth
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A more recent treatment of the above, “flight revisited”
We cloak ourselves in practiced guise,
resolute beneath the hush—
a fortress of questioning silence,
fear worn like threadbare armour,
not wept but weathered.
Apprehension, the quiet inheritance,
sculpts routine from shadow.
One becomes two,
then many—the murmuring chain
forged in mimicry.
It drones in tones of beige and duty,
you name it dull,
but the ritual is ritual because
we’re born into its design.
This curse—not shouted,
but etched.
The birthmark of belonging,
sealed before choice finds breath.
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: July 14th, 2025 05:22
- Comment from author about the poem: Okay, Tristan; here’s one. It’s a bit cringe. And the voice is as bright as a sunny day. Is there something to be said about teenage angst? It’s sophomoric at best. But there we go.
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Comments1
I suppose that this too may be taken many ways but my read is in this metaphor of a plain suit we all wish to blend in out of fear of rejection so we never get to show our colors. The world remains drab and dull. I choose to circulate with birds of bright feathers the oddballs that have no fear for they help take mine away. A wonderful write Cryptic.
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