no longer mine, just caden.
this isn’t really poetry anymore.
not sure what to do anymore without you.
kinda done with everything.
i know you won’t read this but just know my heart physically hurts, i miss you holding me more than anything.
not sure how long this thinning string i’m hanging on to will last.
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- Comment from author about the poem: Please. Just please
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Despair following a breakup sadness and sense of it being an ending that is unacceptable. Well written
A heartfelt write of feeling in despair at the break up of a relationship, struggling to except the end, have been there myself, all the best, nicely expressed and written write
Struggling to find motivation after a loss is always tough. Stay strong and keep letting the emotions flow through your pen.
But I don’t want this to be goodbye
me neither. there’s a quote from that book i love “turtles all the way down” , “no one says goodbye unless they want to see you again” i want to see you again.
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