goodbye

poetry.els

no longer mine, just caden.

this isn’t really poetry anymore. 

not sure what to do anymore without you.

kinda done with everything.

i know you won’t read this but just know my heart physically hurts, i miss you holding me more than anything.

not sure how long this thinning string i’m hanging on to will last.

 

  • Author: poetry.els (Online Online)
  • Published: July 1st, 2025 11:51
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please. Just please
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 6
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  • sorenbarrett

    Despair following a breakup sadness and sense of it being an ending that is unacceptable. Well written

  • Poetic Licence

    A heartfelt write of feeling in despair at the break up of a relationship, struggling to except the end, have been there myself, all the best, nicely expressed and written write

  • Bragee

    Struggling to find motivation after a loss is always tough. Stay strong and keep letting the emotions flow through your pen.



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