Two black cats sit side by side
with the colour of the evenings sky
on a soft stable swing that’s helpful and holding them with care
the moon is shining in the daytime clouds with hints of pastel pink brushing the sky
and they are sitting on the settled gentle swing
living lightly by that talkative tree
looking at the balanced moon
which reminds them of daisy petals , the clear white swans
and soft gentle snow
tho they are far from winter
searching the dreaming summers sky
two pieces of night , Maybe
looking at the colours of the day
wondering what it would be like to be
the whites , pinks and blues balanced by the moon
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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Comments7
This is such a dreamlike meditation, like a melodious canvas with the soft brushstrokes of a waking dream 🕊️🙏🏻
That’s a lovely comment
Thankyou )))
A lovely fanciful poem with real and vivid images that seem metaphoric in many ways. Lovely
Thankyou very much )) it’s nice to write from pictures
Glad you enjoyed my poem
I was thinking of maybe starting a fusion poem .. one day .. maybe you could add a verse
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When you do let me know
Can’t do one at the moment .. Kerp trying .. it won’t let me publish one for some reason
Excellent write
Thankyou 🙂 glad you liked my poem
Appreciate your comments
You're welcome
A wonderful write that carries you along with beautiful imagery, really enjoyed the read
Thankyou very much 🙂
I really liked writing this one
Glad it was enjoyed
Thankyou
You are very welcome
I love your ekphrastic poems, Caring Dove. A forever fan you have here! Brava! 🌹👏
Thankyou ! 🙂 glad you liked my poem
You are welcome!
Beautiful words Yellow Rose.
Andy
Beautiful words Yellow Rose.
Andy
Thankyou 🙂
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