Earth Shaking

Mutley Ravishes

I'm an intentional 

Neurogenic tremor

What if I can reach deeper

Than any of your intellectual 

Shenanigans

Ever can?

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  • Cheeky Missy

    Hahaha, then we'll...collapse?! You rascal, you're still a riot.

  • Poetic Licence

    You have got these down to a tee, enjoyed the read

    • Mutley Ravishes

      Thanks a million. Nothing like a good shake, as the animals know!

      • Poetic Licence

        You are very welcome

      • sorenbarrett

        I feel that tremor Mutley a battle between intellectual and emotional and each with merit but which is stronger? Nice loved it and a fave

        • Mutley Ravishes

          I guess an emotion is a thought with extra power? Anyways, neither can reach deep enough imo, (except love, of course, if we label it as an emotion).

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          Love this and totally relate! Well done! A fave! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

        • arqios

          Superbly put MutleyπŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»

          • Mutley Ravishes

            Thanks a million. The "nerds" days are numbered! I say it's time for them to de-nerd themselves and start living! (and no, dear "nerds" A.I ain't the answer)

          • NafisaSB

            question is how will you know until you try
            you have posed a good riddle...what's your answer btw

            • Mutley Ravishes

              For sure. Try this : give the body a little 5 minute somatic shake, then moving fluidly for 10 or so minutes (like dancing, letting the body guide the movement), then sitting still for 15 minutes or so. Then you'll have an answer!

              • NafisaSB

                omg - at my age- and with my body - it may not be waddling, but definitely far from fluid and graceful - sitting peacefully after a workout is more my style - lol



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