Red umbrella
sits in the outside
on a puddle
feeling the rain
feeling the blues yet maybe there’s a need for green grass below her feet
sunlight and rainbows
there to feel the rain
yet maybe she doesn’t just want to be there for someone
so they can take her out in the rain
maybe umbrella wishes to just be taken out in the soft sunlight
without the rain falling
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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I take this for a metaphor for a person exposed to the storms of life that wishes no longer to be the shelter for others but to be taken in themselves out of the storm. Very nice
Thankyou ))
yeah , I guess it could be viewed that way . An umbrella is often just there for others and may well get fed up of being out in the rain , or even stuck in the four walls ..
Yeah and I guess rain could sometimes be thought of as sadness ‘ falling . Or our emotions …
I like writing to pictures , they make me think
Thankyou very much )
That's a Lovely write of someone who wants to be protected from the storms instead of protecting others for a change, enjoyed the read
Thankyou for the lovely comment
I’m glad you enjoyed reading this
You are very welcome
Beautiful imagery of longing and self-discovery—sometimes even umbrellas crave the sun. A poignant reminder that we all yearn for moments of lightness beyond our expected roles.
Thankyou for your kind words ))
Glad you liked my poem
Yeah , true ..
Those storms in life will move of Yellow Rose and the light will shine on you.
Andy
Thankyou for the kind words ))
I don’t always feel sad ..
thanks for the read and kind comment
Excellent my friend. I love these poems of yours. A gift you have! 🌹👏 Faved.
Thankyou very much for your kind words on my poems )))
You are most welcome! Thank you for writing and sharing them!
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