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Thank you
The Sun has returned
Thank you
The Sun has returned
Fondly Remembered.
Today I remember yesterday's history.
That history has helped mould me.
Tomorrow will be new history.
That history will help guide me.
Today I start my journey into history.
Hoping that history will fondly Remember Me.
Tobani May 2025.
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Tobani / Nataiella (Pseudonym) (
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Beautifully balanced this poem has that ring to it that is remembered because it is complete and rolls like a ball down hill until it reaches the bottom. The end ties into the beginning and like the Ouroboros feeds on itself. A fave
Thank you for your kind words, have a wonderful weekend
Reading this feels like an embrace; a gentle meditation on time, memory, and legacy. It honours the past for shaping who we are, and looks to the future as both a guide and a continuation of that story. With quiet strength, it reminds us that every action we take becomes part of history, and carries the hope that our lives will be remembered with warmth. It’s a soft-spoken reflection on the desire to leave behind something meaningful. 🕊️🙏🏻
Thank you kindly for your kind feedback, really appreciated, have a wonderful weekend
Most welcome and enjoy your weekend as well 🙏🏻🕊️
Erm, who are ya? I forgot! (heehee). Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
Thank you, have a great weekend
EXCELLENT! SO MUCH SO I HAVE TO SHOUT IN ALL CAPS! 🤣 Seriously, and excellent poem from its conciseness, through its form, and to its message. 🌹👏
Thank you kindly, have a wonderful weekend
You are most welcome! You too! P.S. Kind thoughts for my doggy. It's blow up colorful bombs in the air weekend here in the USA! 🤣
Your words beautifully capture the timeless dance between past, present, and future. The cyclical nature of history and legacy is so thoughtfully expressed. May your journey indeed be remembered fondly.
Thank you for your kind words, have a wonderful weekend
Superb
Thank you, have a wonderful weekend
There's a lot in what you say. The flow of time; that old enigma.
Thank you, enjoy the rest of your weekend
Whether or not thy wish is granted I canna say certainly, however, history is a very, very fascinating study, whence my favorite authors in highschool: Sir Walter Scott, James Fenimore Cooper, and Jane Austen. More power to you, delving into that most engaging subject. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
None of can say but we can hope, thank you kindly, very much appreciated
Nicely done
Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated
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