Fondly Remembered.

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Fondly Remembered.

 

Today I remember yesterday's history.

That history has helped mould me.

Tomorrow will be new history.

That history will help guide me.

Today I start my journey into history.

Hoping that history will fondly Remember Me.

 

Tobani May 2025.

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  • sorenbarrett

    Beautifully balanced this poem has that ring to it that is remembered because it is complete and rolls like a ball down hill until it reaches the bottom. The end ties into the beginning and like the Ouroboros feeds on itself. A fave

    • Poetic Licence

      Thank you for your kind words, have a wonderful weekend

    • arqios

      Reading this feels like an embrace; a gentle meditation on time, memory, and legacy. It honours the past for shaping who we are, and looks to the future as both a guide and a continuation of that story. With quiet strength, it reminds us that every action we take becomes part of history, and carries the hope that our lives will be remembered with warmth. It’s a soft-spoken reflection on the desire to leave behind something meaningful. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

      • Poetic Licence

        Thank you kindly for your kind feedback, really appreciated, have a wonderful weekend

        • arqios

          Most welcome and enjoy your weekend as well πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

        • orchidee

          Erm, who are ya? I forgot! (heehee). Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.

        • Tristan Robert Lange

          EXCELLENT! SO MUCH SO I HAVE TO SHOUT IN ALL CAPS! 🀣 Seriously, and excellent poem from its conciseness, through its form, and to its message. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

          • Poetic Licence

            Thank you kindly, have a wonderful weekend

            • Tristan Robert Lange

              You are most welcome! You too! P.S. Kind thoughts for my doggy. It's blow up colorful bombs in the air weekend here in the USA! 🀣

            • Mottakeenur Rehman

              Your words beautifully capture the timeless dance between past, present, and future. The cyclical nature of history and legacy is so thoughtfully expressed. May your journey indeed be remembered fondly.

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                Thank you for your kind words, have a wonderful weekend

              • Thomas W Case

                Superb

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                  Thank you, have a wonderful weekend

                • Kevin Hulme

                  There's a lot in what you say. The flow of time; that old enigma.

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                    Thank you, enjoy the rest of your weekend

                  • Cheeky Missy

                    Whether or not thy wish is granted I canna say certainly, however, history is a very, very fascinating study, whence my favorite authors in highschool: Sir Walter Scott, James Fenimore Cooper, and Jane Austen. More power to you, delving into that most engaging subject. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

                    • Poetic Licence

                      None of can say but we can hope, thank you kindly, very much appreciated

                    • Priya Tomar

                      Nicely done

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                        Thank you for your feedback, very much appreciated



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