Can ye not.....

orchidee

Fido asks me.....

Can ye not write one serious comment to poems

At least now and then?! Doh!

He speaks old-fashioned at times

He says ye, thee, thou, etc!

 

Hmm, I'll try, but it might not last

Who knows?

Well, Fido says, you never get many of the cryptic meanings of poems

You just spout some nonsense

Leading the poets up the garden path!

 

Fido says to me, You'll have to think a bit more

Though I know it's not easy

With only 3 brain cells that you have! LOL

 

And he says, I suppose you'll say something 'orrible

About KP again

You'll get out your book entitled:

'1,001 nasty things to say to the spouse'  heehee.

  • Author: orchidee (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 5th, 2025 10:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: A nutty digression!
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 25
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  • sorenbarrett

    Ye and Thee because you've conditioned his brain with all those hymns. Don't start being serious and saying nice things then you'll be just like everyone else and there wiill be no more fun on this site. What would the world be without imagination, especially when it comes to spouses? Good write Orchi

    • orchidee

      Thank you SB. lol.

    • Poetic Licence

      Don't feel pressured by Fido, do what you want to do, entertaining and humourous read

      • orchidee

        Thank you PL. But Fido is the fount of all (well, 99%) wisdom! lol.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome

        • Doggerel Dave

          Go on lead 'em up the garden path - some entrants here will get more life experience there than they have at present....

          • orchidee

            But what if they live in a flat (no garden)?! I must know these things of major importance. lol.

            • Doggerel Dave

              After considerable cogitation and resolve thay may decide to expose themselfs tothe real world and dive through their window to experience this...wow! Sixth floor... kaboom ... congestion in that heaven of yours....,

            • arqios

              Some do enjoy being shown the garden or merely to be taken through the garden path! ⛲️

              • orchidee

                Thank you A.

              • NafisaSB

                Some sense in this supposed nonsense 👌👏

                • orchidee

                  Thank you N.

                  • NafisaSB

                    you are welcome, as always



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