Out in the deeps
Tried to reach
An assumption
With intellectual functions
But they run out of oxygen
Thirty or so seconds
Into the dive
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Clever and too true, some speak without end in intellectual ramblings and explanations that run continually from one divergence to another until the original topic is forgotten. Very nicely written
Thanks, Soren.
Throw the bullet's in the air so they don't see the bomb coming, enjoyed the read
Thanks a million!
That is so scary and so descriptive of not only the physical perils of diving, which I have had some experience of and other such related misadventures where we can find ourselves out of our depth 🕊️🙏🏻
For sure. The idea of free diving is scary. And to let go of thinking.
Must be! I’ve free dived once in a crater lake and once for sea grape hunting and once sky dived. Funny how there weren’t any addictive returns.
"Don't hold your breath now--!!!" My, my, my, will you forever mystify me? Charming. We thanks thee for sharing.
Our core assumptions are tenacious, to say the least, aren't they? Never met a thought that can "defeat" one!
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